May 2, 2013

Broken Forest "Choose Your Own Adventure" Hop

If you've landed here during your adventure, skip all this and go below.

If you're wondering what's going on, go here to start your own adventure!

And may The Creator bless you on your journey.

Your story continues here...

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“Go, I’ll be right behind you!”

One hand holds the beet juice; the other holds a small dagger.

Sweat slides down your back. The first catch always makes you a bit jumpy. One . . . two . . . On three you push the weeds aside and find a large coon who hisses and jumps at you.

Artwork by Nick Frizalone


The pouch falls from your hand as you grab the dagger with both hands, stabbing the creature in the chest before it can stick its claws into your skin.


Ella cries out your name and you turn to see her chasing Brev.

You snatch the fallen pouch and then dash after Ella, praying she doesn’t run too far. Her stark blonde hair is the only thing you can see and it’s moving farther and farther away.


You can no longer see her. She’s most likely already caught Brev which means you need to find another player and fast.

A stream runs through this part of the forest and you stop to drink. While kneeling down, you see a shadow, and hear the soft crunch of grass. Moments later, wild blueberry juice splashes your face.


He smiles, and it diffuses your anger.

“Are you upset with me?”

“What do you think?” You push past him, but he grabs your arm.

“I’m sorry. But you know how much I love being Jenzi.”

Tavo always seems to win AND find the flower. Ella thinks Tavo uses magic but you don’t believe her. Everyone knows magic users must be sent to The Order. Tavo wouldn’t risk it.

He wipes the berry juice off your check with his thumb. “Will you hunt with me?”

A) No. Go here.
B) Yes. Go here.

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Blurb: Hopeless he'll never be more than the boy who didn't save his brother, 17-year-old Avikar accepts his life as the family stable boy, trying to forget the past. But when his sister, Jeslyn, is kidnapped, the thought of losing another sibling catapults him on a desperate quest. With his best friend by his side, and using the tracking skills he learned from his father, he discovers Jeslyn has been taken, kidnapped by one Lucino, the young lord of Daath, a mystical place thought only to exist in fables.

And Lucino has plans for Jeslyn.

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Author Bio

Eliza graduated from Dowling College with a BS in Visual Communications. When she’s not arguing with excel at her day job, or playing Dragon Age 2, again, she’s writing. Her stories hold a bit of the fantastical and there’s always a romance. She resides on Long Island with her husband, two kids and one very snuggly pit bull.


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