September 17, 2012

A Matter of Point of View

Last Thursday, the wonderfully and impressively organized Deanna Barnhart, your GUTGAA mastermind, held a Twitter Q+A for querying writers. It went smashingly. I think we even trended!

However, something I noticed was that some writers seemed a little fixated on the question of point of view. It's true that many young adult books are told in 1st person point of view. I've heard that it's because it helps put the reader more firmly in the narrator's shoes, and that teens relate better to it.

But I like to think it's a matter of personal preference. Like everything else in publishing, it's subjective. (And there are tons of fantastic YA books written in 3rd person out there.)

I have two seventeen-year-old nieces, both of whom are avid readers. When questioned about which pov they prefer, they both said they don't care and, frankly, barely even notice it. What matters is whether the story and the characters grab them, and that can be done regardless of which pov the author chooses.

Now, sometimes, it's true that a book or a character's voice just isn't working in a certain point of view. And when that realization hits, it can be a major motivational and creative vortex.

The manuscript I was working on last year began in 3rd person. A couple chapters in, I realized something just wasn't right. I considered changing the point of view, but I had never actually written in 1st person before, and it seemed a daunting challenge. However, going with my gut turned out to be the right decision because that was the book with which I signed my agent. Even so, I still prefer writing in 3rd and that's the pov my WIP is in. Agents won't care either way so long as it works for the book.

If you need further proof, my fabulous CP Mindee has sold two book series, one written in 1st person and the other in 3rd. Both are equally amazing.

There are so many things to think about when writing a book--deadlines (professional or otherwise), plot twists, character arcs, pacing and conflict. Point of view is just a tiny part of the process and not something that should be giving you unnecessary stress.

So what do you guys think? What's your preference?



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I like to imagine Tim Gunn when I say 'Make it work!' XD Now, HOW to make it work... that's something every writer has to figure out for themselves.
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Rebecca B · 653 weeks ago

I agree that POV depends on the story. I rewrote one MS to change from 3rd to 1st, and it made all the difference. But I've tried to write other things in 1st, and it simply didn't work. After writing 3 mss in a row that are 1st, I think I'm ready to try 3rd again soon. As a reader, I might prefer that.
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Yes, I really think it changes from manuscript to manuscript. This recent WIP actually began in 1st but I changed it to 3rd b/c it just felt more natural that way. I love reading in 3rd as well :)
I wrote in 3rd for the longest time (middle grade) and then suddenly saw my protagonists come alive more by switching to 1st. My current project is back in 3rd, and I'm struggling a bit with whether or not my main character's personality is coming through as well. We'll see how it goes :)
1 reply · active 653 weeks ago
Good luck with your project :) Some writers do find it easier to get into their protag's head with first person. I hope you find what works best for you!
I prefer reading 3rd but will read 1st. I also don't read much YA, so I'm not sure how helpful that knowledge is.
1 reply · active 653 weeks ago
I also prefer reading in 3rd, but I'm completely fine with 1st. 3rd person is more prevalent in adult fiction, but there's definitely some 1st in there too. YA or adult, I like to think that what matters is how well the story or characters grab me, regardless of pov :)
Thanks, Lori. You're the best. Interesting point, I intentionally wrote FE in 3rd because TNA was 1st. I wanted to both distance myself from the first series and also challenge myself to something new.
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No, you are! :D

Well, you done good. FE is still my favoritest ever.
I write my novels mostly in first person. I'm not sure why. They always just come out that way. I do appreciate third person when I read it, though. There's a lot more room for author voice. In first you have to worry so much if you sound like your character. But I love reading both.
1 reply · active 653 weeks ago
That's true. There's little room for error in first person, which can sometimes be restrictive (while at the same time really digging into your character's head). Pros and cons for both obvsly :)
I really like 3rd person so have only written in that POV so far. But I'd be open to considering 1st person if I thought it'd work better. Interesting your nieces opinions on this.
1 reply · active 653 weeks ago
I was surprised by how well 1st person worked for me when I was writing it for the first time. But I AM more comfortable in 3rd :) Maybe you can do some test runs some time and see if you like it.
I prefer third person limited. First person is a bit awkward to me, both to write and to read. Sometimes first person limits the story so badly the reader is missing half the plot and has to make do with the MC's guesses.

I'm considering trying a first person narrative for NaNo this year, to try it out properly and find out what I can do with it.
1 reply · active 653 weeks ago
It's always fun to try something you haven't before and see if it works for you. You write third person limited so well, but maybe first person can help you dig even deeper into your character's thoughts and emotions.
I used to read ONLY novels with the 3rd POV until I was eighteen. That was when the first POV totally bought me over. I think reading so many amazing entries on Faithwriters with the first POV was partly to blame. And Twilight.

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