September 26, 2011

The Handy Book of Villainous Dialogue

My crit partner Anna wrote a fun and informative blog post last week about antagonists and dialogue.


One of the danger zones when fleshing out characters is the overuse of cliches and cliche-like dialogue. The heroes talking like heroes, the damsel in distress talking like damsels in distress, and the villains talking like, well, the villains. *laughs* This creates a one-layered depth to the character - something that would either:
a) incite some eye-rolling from the reader
b) make them stop reading completely because the characters seem so predictable or
c) wonder what the hell they're still doing reading something that feels like it's been overdone loads of times when they could be watching the new episode of True Blood instead.
-.-

All those aforementioned things = BAD

Check it out

Have a great week, guys!

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Dialogue can be rough. This is a great reminder! It's why I always try to make my antagonists as human as possible. The hero of their own story.
I'll take a look.
Sounds good! Writing believable dialogue is vital for sure. Heading over to check it out now. :)
Definitely going to check it out. By the way, LOVE your Disney villain pic!
*sneaks in here to give you some love for the pimpage* <3
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Alleged Author · 704 weeks ago

I try not to incite eye rolling! Great post!

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