June 18, 2012

Novel Beginnings

So a couple weeks ago, I said I had started my wip, but I left out the part where I spent an entire day agonizing on how to start it. On the bright side, a day is nothing compared to the two weeks it took to write the first couple sentences of my previous manuscript. And for the manuscript before that one, I rewrote the beginning three times. Which is to say starting a new story is always the hardest part for me.

It was never this hard when I was writing fanfiction, but that changed when I began researching agents. All the advice out there from writers and agents emphasizes how important a story's beginning is and all the many, many ways you can ruin it. There are all these lists for how not to open your story--don't open with a character waking up or getting into a car accident or mid-action scene or with back story or picking herbs in a field or description of setting or a flashback or dialogue or a prologue, etc etc, until you feel like there's no way to start the dang thing without hitting someone's 'What Not to Do' list.

By this point, writing that first sentence has become such a daunting task that you're debilitated by the fear that, if you fail, you will completely blow your chance at getting an agent or editor or reader or what have you.

With my previous manuscript, the pressure to get those first few pages right was hardest because I wasn't agented yet. Yes, it IS important to get that opening right, but don't let it become so overwhelming that it stifles your writing. Just write. You can always come back and fix it later even if it feels, at that moment, Too Important To Mess Up. Sometimes, a beginning will become clear only after you've written the ending.

It's also important to keep in mind that what's not right for one story might be right for yours. Those 'What Not to Do' lists can be subjective. I agree that it's probably not a good idea to start with your character waking up and describing how the sunshine falls across her bed, but whatever you choose, you have to make it work for YOUR story. The Hunger Games begins with Katniss waking up on the day of the Reaping. City of Bones starts with a brief scene from Clary's pov before it shifts into the pov of an insignificant demon who dies a few pages later. Nightshade begins mid-action scene with Calla fighting a bear to defend a boy she doesn't know. My favorite book this year Shadow and Bone starts with a prologue.

So while I'm not sure if the beginning of my wip is right, I'm not too worried for the time being. I can always fix it later :)

How do you guys feel about openings? Easy? Hard?

Happy Monday, all! ♥



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Well I've started two of mine with dialogue and one with a character waking up : D
Actually, he was being woken up. By his sister, who's a selective mute. So maybe that's ok. Bah! Stuff it, I say, it's never the start and always the middle that troubles me!
1 reply · active 666 weeks ago
The middle does seem to be the plague for most people! It's tough for me, too, in terms of momentum and pacing. But just writing it down isn't as hard as beginnings for me.

Whatever you're doing it's clearly working for you :D
That's a great way to start, and I think I will think of it this way with my next wip :D
Everyone seems to agree they find the middle the toughest haha. I must be unusual xD
I struggle with beginnings too, but I don't always take into consideration the "don't" list. My book got picked up and the very first line is dialogue. I had a few people tell me I should change it, but from the start it was how that story was supposed to kick off no matter what. I think you can throw out the don'ts but you have to be really sure of why you have to.
1 reply · active 666 weeks ago
That's awesome! It's obviously worked for you, so just keep going what you do since you do it well :D
So far I've only struggled with them about as much as I struggle with everything else. :) In fact, sometimes I even like them better... Quite a few books I know I'll attempt in the future have come to me as first sentences or opening scenes. My current WIP didn't start that way, but I wasn't very emotionally attached to its opening and I think that helped.
1 reply · active 666 weeks ago
You know, the first sentence of my previous wip came to me easily as well! It was the next sentence and the following page that stalled me haha.
I rewrite my beginnings almost every story. My first start is just to get me in to the story and I try not to stress about it, then I go back and work on it.
Great point! I always end up rewriting my first pages too... but I think you hit on something important--sometimes what's right for a story, may be everything we're told NOT to do. For ex.: my new WIP starts with a prologue. I always here what a no no they are, but it just feels right for this story. (I just hope readers thinks so too!)
I don't worry too much about the beginning. I can always change it during the editing process.

Btw, you're a fast writer! (Saw on twitter your WIP progress) ;D
Great post! Beginnings are definitely the worst for me. I scrapped the entire first chapter of my first WIP, so I let myself off the hook the second time around. As I piddled around with those first few sentences, I kept telling myself, "No pressure. You'll just scrap it, anyway." I think the mental game worked, because I actually ended up changing very little during revisions. Definitely a mental victory for me!
I know exactly what you mean about being overwhelmed by all the advice! I've been paralyzed by it before because I'm like trying to write the beginning while keeping ALL of those tips in mind. It's crazy, and I agree with you that in the end, you just have to do what works for your story.

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